Hellmeister
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OK currantly im an aspiring author, and im writing two comics on and off when i have free time. I'd like you gusy to rate the ideas for me (if you steal them i WILL show you why im called the hellmeister)
OK this is my currant fav, and the one im into the further. I'm not sure of a name for my main character but when ive decided it then ill have my title.
Essentially its about a rebel teen of 16 who just hates everything, hes a punk and he especially dislikes religeon. At the end of the first comic my intentions are (well ive already written it so meh :P) to kill him, so yeah he gets run over after he runs away from a friend of his who hes jsut argueed with. In his moment of death the world stops, and goes black, his spirit arises out of his body and enter the grim reaper. The boy somehow survies the reapers soul banishment and he reflects in apon the reaper, killing it. Since he killed the grim reaper, he has become it without meaning two, and he is forced to work under the being he hates the most, God. He starts his duty, and being a semi gothic rebel he has no problems banishing the souls of people to purgatory. Now people cannot see him unless they are dead, so he often follows his girlfriend, and hugs her as she morns him, but naturally she cant feel it or see him (i like to put in that sad touch, it makes us realise how lucky we are). Now later in the series he has to battle demons as the devil tries to tempt him into worknig for him and killing God, and even though the boy hates religeon he defends God, untill his bitter end. Im still gonig and thinknig of plots as i go but essentially i intend to make him come up against the only one he loves, at he end of the series i shall make him sacrafise himself to spare his girlfriend a horrible fate in a very dramatic and touching way where she sees it happening
At this ponit when i finish teh first series (i ahve a rough lay out for 32 comics so far) i mgiht kill him for good, or have a dark resurectino and brin him back for a second series. When i start work and have funding i intend to get these done as proper comics in a few years.
The next one is based mroe around a comerdy as opposed to action, but still follows a fairly gothic theme. Its about a vampire that is alergic to blood other then his own, so he cannot drink blood. He servives by drinknig alcohol (so yeah the main character is a drunk vampire). Antoher young dude, but like 2100 in vamp years, so like 21 in human years. Hes in a vampire uni and the story is themed around his misadventures of uni and other stuff while being drunk and slightly stoned (obviously this is a vampric uni so its not actuly educational based). Thats all i got for this oen for now, ive doen the first chapter introducing it and m thinkngi as i go. Essentually it will eb soem dark comerdy, im still worknig on it :)
So any poniters for my comics? I'd really appriciacte it :)
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| 02/24/07 16:55 |
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midnight guard
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Heh niceo ne Hell, i like the Grim Reaper comic idea :P It would maybe be more enjoyable for CoX players if you put in some features that we maybe see nowadays? Such as... uh.. well, thats your choice to decide anyway xD
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| 02/24/07 17:02 |
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Hellmeister
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No these arent nothing to do with CoV, im only asking for opinions
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| 02/24/07 17:12 |
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Hellmeister
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(Bump)
(sorry >_<)
DANCE WITH DARKNESS!
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CoV
Hellmeister - Lvl 35 Fire/Dark Cor
Stonestrike - Lvl 34 Super strenght/Stone Brute (current main toon)
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| 03/03/07 09:40 |
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Professor Crackpot
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Your second idea sounds like a pretty funny concept, but the first one just seems a bit...unusual to me.
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| 03/03/07 19:50 |
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Abyssal
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The first one is, as was said before, just kind of unusual. And non-religious people - like me - will stay away from it. "..tempted by satan to work against god" sounds too biblical to me.
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| 03/03/07 20:19 |
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Hellmeister
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I might have pitched it wrong but the idea is its suppost to be more satanic then catholic, its turning out that way cause im trying to pitch this more towards the darker of the nation
And the god within the story isnt the god that the bible preaches
Trust me its anti religeon
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Hellmeister - Lvl 35 Fire/Dark Cor
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| 03/04/07 04:09 |
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