Exofluke
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Hey guys, I'm looking for some feedback about the story I wrote. I really am quite curious what you guys think.
http://guildwars.gameamp.com/article/viewArticle/1054.php
But if you could spare me any kind of lecture about grammer or dumb obvious mistakes. I just want your opinions about the story. Did you enjoy it? Did it make sense...etc...
I don't mean to try and "brush" up my story by making a topic about it. But as a film director, I' am always looking for opinions about my work. Same applies for stories or drawings...etc.
Thanks in advance ^_^
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| 12/20/07 14:55 |
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Blazings
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Did you make this topic to receive cred again? =P Just like you did with that sig? I don't really read stories, I rather have adventures myself on GW when I have the time ^^
~Blazings
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| 12/20/07 15:17 |
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fludz
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Well, i guess it was pretty good. I didn't see a huge underlying reason to the story though. It feels like it needs a little more to it, like maybe some back ground of the main character. But all in all, not horrible
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| 12/20/07 15:45 |
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